3 files changed, 18 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml
index 0361b9650d..97ba3e01ea 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml,v 1.322 2000/10/28 14:07:00 trevor Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml,v 1.323 2000/10/28 20:10:19 jdp Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="contrib">
@@ -544,11 +544,13 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>New code or major value-added packages</title>
       
-      <para>In the rare case of a significant contribution of a large body
+      <para>In the case of a significant contribution of a large body
 	work, or the addition of an important new feature to FreeBSD, it
 	becomes almost always necessary to either send changes as uuencoded
-	tar files or upload them to our ftp site <ulink
-	  url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/incoming/">ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/incoming/</ulink>.</para>
+	tar files or upload them to a web or FTP site for other people to
+	access.  If you do not have access to a web or FTP site, ask on an
+	appropriate FreeBSD mailing list for someone to host the changes for
+	you.</para>
 	  
       <para>When working with large amounts of code, the touchy subject of
 	copyrights also invariably comes up.  Acceptable copyrights for code
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml
index 0361b9650d..97ba3e01ea 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml,v 1.322 2000/10/28 14:07:00 trevor Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml,v 1.323 2000/10/28 20:10:19 jdp Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="contrib">
@@ -544,11 +544,13 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>New code or major value-added packages</title>
       
-      <para>In the rare case of a significant contribution of a large body
+      <para>In the case of a significant contribution of a large body
 	work, or the addition of an important new feature to FreeBSD, it
 	becomes almost always necessary to either send changes as uuencoded
-	tar files or upload them to our ftp site <ulink
-	  url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/incoming/">ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/incoming/</ulink>.</para>
+	tar files or upload them to a web or FTP site for other people to
+	access.  If you do not have access to a web or FTP site, ask on an
+	appropriate FreeBSD mailing list for someone to host the changes for
+	you.</para>
 	  
       <para>When working with large amounts of code, the touchy subject of
 	copyrights also invariably comes up.  Acceptable copyrights for code
diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml
index 0361b9650d..97ba3e01ea 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml,v 1.322 2000/10/28 14:07:00 trevor Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/contrib/chapter.sgml,v 1.323 2000/10/28 20:10:19 jdp Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="contrib">
@@ -544,11 +544,13 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>New code or major value-added packages</title>
       
-      <para>In the rare case of a significant contribution of a large body
+      <para>In the case of a significant contribution of a large body
 	work, or the addition of an important new feature to FreeBSD, it
 	becomes almost always necessary to either send changes as uuencoded
-	tar files or upload them to our ftp site <ulink
-	  url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/incoming/">ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/incoming/</ulink>.</para>
+	tar files or upload them to a web or FTP site for other people to
+	access.  If you do not have access to a web or FTP site, ask on an
+	appropriate FreeBSD mailing list for someone to host the changes for
+	you.</para>
 	  
       <para>When working with large amounts of code, the touchy subject of
 	copyrights also invariably comes up.  Acceptable copyrights for code