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@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ ppp_profile="<replaceable>your_profile</replaceable>"</programlisting>
is that you add the rules for everything you would like to allow,
and then everything else is automatically denied.</para>
- <para>Following that, let's create the directory where we will store our
+ <para>First off, let's create the directory where we will store our
firewall rules. In this example, we'll use <filename
class="directory">/etc/firewall</filename>. Change into the
directory and edit the file <filename>fwrules</filename> as we
@@ -226,9 +226,9 @@ $fwcmd add deny log ip from any to any</programlisting>
<para>You now have a fully functional firewall that only allows
connections to ports 22 and 80 and will log any other connection
- attempts. You may now safely reboot and the firewall should
+ attempts. You may now safely safely reboot and the firewall should
be automatically started and the ruleset loaded. If you find this
- incorrect in any way or experience any problems, or have any
+ incorrect in anyway or experience any problems, or have any
suggestions to improve this page, please email me.</para>
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