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diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml index ca84a765f3..c388e9c163 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ <step><para>Load the <filename>geom_stripe</filename> module:</para> - <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kldload geom_stripe.ko</userinput></screen> + <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kldload geom_stripe</userinput></screen> </step> <step><para>Ensure that a suitable mount point exists. If this @@ -161,10 +161,9 @@ <step><para>Determine the device names for the disks which will be striped, and create the new stripe device. For example, - the following command could be used to stripe two unused, - unpartitioned <acronym>ATA</acronym> disks: - <filename>/dev/ad2</filename> and - <filename>/dev/ad3</filename>.</para> + to stripe two unused and unpartitioned <acronym>ATA</acronym> disks, + for example <filename>/dev/ad2</filename> and + <filename>/dev/ad3</filename>:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gstripe label -v st0 /dev/ad2 /dev/ad3</userinput></screen> @@ -175,8 +174,9 @@ XXX: What message? Put it inside the screen output above. --> </step> - <step><para>A partition table must be created on the new volume - with the following command:</para> + <step><para>Write a standard label, also known as a partition + table, on the new volume and install the default + bootstrap code:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>bsdlabel -wB /dev/stripe/st0</userinput></screen> @@ -186,9 +186,9 @@ XXX: What message? Put it inside the screen output above. in the <filename role="directory">/dev/stripe</filename> directory in addition to the <devicename>st0</devicename> device. Those include <devicename>st0a</devicename> and - <devicename>st0c</devicename>. A file system must now be created - on the <devicename>st0a</devicename> device using the following - <command>newfs</command> command:</para> + <devicename>st0c</devicename>. At this point a file system may be created + on the <devicename>st0a</devicename> device with the + <command>newfs</command> utility:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>newfs -U /dev/stripe/st0a</userinput></screen> @@ -198,8 +198,7 @@ XXX: What message? Put it inside the screen output above. </step> </procedure> - <para>The following command can be used to manually mount a newly - created disk stripe:</para> + <para>To manually mount the created disk stripe:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount /dev/stripe/st0a /mnt</userinput></screen> @@ -279,7 +278,7 @@ Done.</screen> </note> <para>Install a generic <command>fdisk</command> label and boot code - to newly created <devicename>gm0</devicename> device:</para> + to new <devicename>gm0</devicename> device:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>fdisk -vBI /dev/mirror/gm0</userinput></screen> @@ -294,8 +293,8 @@ Done.</screen> the slice and partition size of the other disk.</para> </note> - <para>Use the &man.newfs.8; utility to create a default file - system on the <devicename>gm0s1a</devicename> device node:</para> + <para>Use the &man.newfs.8; utility to construct a default <acronym>UFS</acronym> + file system on the <devicename>gm0s1a</devicename> device node:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>newfs -U /dev/mirror/gm0s1a</userinput></screen> @@ -326,7 +325,7 @@ Done.</screen> refer to <xref linkend="adding-swap-space"> for more information.</para> </footnote>. Change the other file system information to use the - new disk. See the following example:</para> + new disk as shown in the following example:</para> <programlisting># Device Mountpoint FStype Options Dump Pass# #/dev/da0s2b none swap sw 0 0 @@ -347,15 +346,11 @@ Done.</screen> new root partition, a failsafe is available.</para> </note> - <para>Now add the following line to the new - <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para> + <para>Ensure the <filename>geom_mirror.ko</filename> module will load + on boot by running the following command:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo 'geom_mirror_load="YES"' >> /mnt/boot/loader.conf</userinput></screen> - <para>This will instruct &man.loader.8; utility to load the - <filename>geom_mirror.ko</filename> module during system - initialization.</para> - <para>Reboot the system:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen> @@ -393,7 +388,7 @@ mountroot></programlisting> system to a &man.loader.8; prompt. Load the kernel module manually:</para> - <screen>OK? <userinput>load geom_mirror.ko</userinput> + <screen>OK? <userinput>load geom_mirror</userinput> OK? <userinput>boot</userinput></screen> <para>If this works then for whatever reason the module was not |