From fd089bceb3f9de4cb77e0a1973759d6dd49d8f2e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Benedict Reuschling Date: Thu, 28 Aug 2025 15:53:35 +0000 Subject: Avoid the use of "you" in the serialcomms chapter Rewrite sentences that contain 'you', which should be avoided according to the FDP Primer. The resulting sentences are easier to understand and often shorter. I did not change programlistings and other output as these are from programs, which need to be changed first (out of scope of this change). Event: Oslo Hackathon 2025 Reviewed by: carlavilla Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D52218 --- documentation/content/en/books/handbook/serialcomms/_index.adoc | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'documentation') diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/serialcomms/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/serialcomms/_index.adoc index 18637f7d1c..e275e26ae6 100644 --- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/serialcomms/_index.adoc +++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/serialcomms/_index.adoc @@ -56,14 +56,14 @@ UNIX(R) has always had support for serial communications as the very first UNIX( Things have changed a lot from the days when the average terminal consisted of a 10-character-per-second serial printer and a keyboard. This chapter covers some of the ways serial communications can be used on FreeBSD. -After reading this chapter, you will know: +Read this chapter to learn: * How to connect terminals to a FreeBSD system. * How to use a modem to dial out to remote hosts. * How to allow remote users to login to a FreeBSD system with a modem. * How to boot a FreeBSD system from a serial console. -Before reading this chapter, you should: +Before reading this chapter: * Know how to crossref:kernelconfig[kernelconfig, configure and install a custom kernel]. * Understand crossref:basics[basics, FreeBSD permissions and processes]. @@ -880,7 +880,7 @@ Put in an entry for `tip1200` or `cu1200`, but go ahead and use whatever bps rat === Accessing a Number of Hosts Through a Terminal Server Rather than waiting until connected and typing `CONNECT _host_` each time, use ``tip``'s `cm` capability. -For example, these entries in [.filename]#/etc/remote# will let you type `tip pain` or `tip muffin` to connect to the hosts `pain` or `muffin`, and `tip deep13` to connect to the terminal server. +For example, these entries in [.filename]#/etc/remote# allow typing `tip pain` or `tip muffin` to connect to the hosts `pain` or `muffin`, and `tip deep13` to connect to the terminal server. [.programlisting] .... -- cgit v1.2.3